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  It was just another typical night at the Seville household. Dave was still at a meeting for work. Alvin was just sitting in the living room playing video games. Theodore was cooking dinner. Nothing exciting. In the basement were two chipmunks working hard at a science project for class. These two studious munks never seemed to get distracted by anything when working. Tonight, Simon couldn't keep his eyes off of her. She was wearing skinny blue jeans that showed off her perfect hips. A purple v-neck long sleeved shirt and black flats went along with this. Half of her hair was pulled out of her face while the rest was hanging loosely around her beautiful face with slight makeup on it. Who can forget those cute, purple glasses of hers? She was just perfect. He has been catching himself staring at her like this a lot lately, but he just couldn't help himself. There has been a feeling he has been getting since they started high school. Now being juniors, he felt that he should do something about this foreign feeling.... But what?
  
  "Simon? Is everything alright?" Jeanette had stopped what she was doing to notice him staring at her in a dreamy state. This made her cheeks turn a crimson color under her fur.

  "Hm? Oh yeah, sorry. I was just thinking about stuff..."

  "Do you want to talk about it? Anything bothering you?"

  "I'm fine, Jeanette. Thank you." He gave her a slight smile to assure her he was fine, when really he had a lot to say.

  She walked over and placed a hand on his shoulder, making him blush slightly. "You know I am always here for you, Si. You're my best friend."

  He suddenly pulled Jeanette in for a hug, making her go wide eyed at first. But she surrendered and put her arms around his neck. Jeanette really did care for him, in more ways than he would ever know. She just didn't know if she could ever get the guts or find the right words to say to him. Anytime she ever did try, his blue/gray eyes would catch hers and make her feel weak in the knees. This hug was even worse, though, as she felt his strong arms around her. She has noticed since starting high school that his arms have gotten some slight muscles and his shoulders were broader. This made her always swoon on the inside, like it's making her do even more now.

  After what seemed like hours, they pulled away and looked at each other. Just as Simon was going to finally speak his mind...

  "It's getting late, and Miss Miller will be wanting me back home probably." She turned away to start packing her stuff in to her bag.

  "Umm, yeah. You're right. Tomorrow night we can finish the project." He started to drag himself up the stairs with Jeanette close behind, still wondering whether or not he should say something. It was eating him alive inside!

  "Hey Jeanette! You sure you don't wanna stick around for dinner? I'm making spaghetti!" Theodore called out from the kitchen.

  As much as she wanted to stay, she just had to get home and gather her emotions. "No thanks, Theo. Maybe tomorrow."

  They continued to the door. Simon opened it and noticed the rain that was starting.

  "Oh great. I hate rain. Well, see you in the morning, Simon." She gave him a quick peck on the cheek and started running before the down pour came. Not very fast, though, because of the being clumsy factor.

  "Great job, Simon. Now what?" Simon muttered to himself. He pondered whether or not he should do this, but...

  "Wait! Jeanette!" He started after her in to the rain, which started to pick up all of a sudden. Jeanette stopped in her tracks to notice her name being called. She turned and saw Simon running after her.

  "Simon! Are you crazy? It's pouring!"

  "I don't care right now, Jeanette. If I don't say what I need to say now, it will keep me up all night." He shut his eyes for a moment to gather his thoughts. "Jean.. I don't know how to describe what I feel right now. Actually, what I've been feeling for quite some time now. Anytime I look at you, or even hear your name, my heart starts beating like crazy! I g-guess what I'm trying to say is... I love you, Jeanette Miller. More than you will ever know."

  Jeanette just could not believe it. The one person who she has always had feelings for, felt them for her as well? "Oh my gosh, Simon. I-I.. I love you, too. More than you will ever know." The bespectacled munks were so happy. Simon cupped her face with his hands, pulling her in for their first kiss. It was slow at first, but then became deep and passionate. Jeanette smiled against his lips as she wrapped her arms around his shoulders. His hands moved from her face to her waist as they both pulled each other as close as they could with rain falling down on their lips. They both slowly pulled away with their eyes still closed, as they felt as if they were on cloud nine. They opened their eyes at the same time, both filled with love for their counterpart.

  "I suddenly really like rain." she giggled as they both leaned in for another mesmerizing kiss.   
I can't believe I am finally doing this! *happy dance* I am finally sharing a story about my favorite couple! I wish I could draw, I really want an illustration of this. *sigh* Would someone like to do one for me? hehe :) This is my one shot of Simon and Jeanette. The song "Sparks Fly" by Taylor Swift inspired me. Enjoy!
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jagers14hotmailcom Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
OMG, that was seriously beautiful. Please look away! (sobbing uncontrollably)
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awwww! *hugs* thank you!
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jagers14hotmailcom Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
no problemo. I just thought that was a great story. Im a Simonette all the way.
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So am I if you couldn't tell hehe
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jagers14hotmailcom Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i could tell, all right. Your skills show it. God bless you.
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh that means so much to me! thank you! :)
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jagers14hotmailcom Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
you're welcome =)
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unknownperson1 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
Very Romantic
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! that was my full intention hehe :)
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lovingrace Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very adorable
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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TheSquirrelettes Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
I LOVE THIS!!
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, glad you do! :)
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TheSquirrelettes Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012
The only thing that makes me uncomfortable about this,is the fact that Simon & Jeanette wanna have kids.:/
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
.....I never mentioned anything about that in here.
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TheSquirrelettes Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012
Oops,that's another story.My bad.:(
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOL it's cool, you just had me worried for a minute there
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TheSquirrelettes Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
Yeah,that was made by another deviant.Now to change subject:I LOVED CHIPWRECKED!!(And I'm currently listening to Your Love Is My Drug By Ke$ha.)
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Chipwrecked was ahhhmazing!! Even my friend who isn't as big of a fan said it was one of the cutest movies ever :) sooo many Simonette moments! <3
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JeanetteChipette13 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student Interface Designer
omg! im in love with this! thiis so good!
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awww thank you!
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CartoonBoyfriends Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwwwww!!! So cute!!! I'll draw a picture for it!!
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yayyy that would be awesome! I got two other people already, but the more the merrier! :D
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CartoonBoyfriends Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
[link] ... Hope you like it!!
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1Bluefur Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww.. That was well done and wonderfully romantic! <3
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much! :D
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1Bluefur Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome c:
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Neko-me Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very lovely! :D
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! :D
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Neko-me Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! :D
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MikeHardyboy1 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww woo damb cute <3 very freaking good story, I loved the description. The story captivated me to keep reading.
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yayy! thank you! I just hope someone can make a cute picture for me :) that would be a dream come true
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MikeHardyboy1 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I could try for you. You know, like if you don't mind lol
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
the more the merrier!
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I got someone to do it but you can if you really want to :)
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blackrose96becky Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012
Aww love it!!!
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks a bunch! :)
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marine3395 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
LOVEEEEE!!!!~ I love Taylor Swift!~ I love Simon and Jeanette!!!...and I LOVE THIS XDDD
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you sooo much! and thanks for adding it to your favorites! that means a lot to me :)
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marine3395 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No problem!~ xDD Its super cute!
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aww thanks! hehe :)
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marine3395 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I even blushed while reading it xDD! lol It's just so dang cute~ I read this Dicript.
You wanted someone to draw a scene for it??? :meow:
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awwww you're a cutie pie! :3 hehe and yes I do very much! at least one drawing would make me thrilled!
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marine3395 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hahaha, Thankies~ :D

lol AWESOME! May I?? :3
Cause I got three in mind xDD
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Jeanette09 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yesssss! :D go right ahead!
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